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Aug 9, 2017 4:09:24 GMT -8
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Post by uncommonman on Aug 9, 2017 4:09:24 GMT -8
Nice, some small notes: Jib, leaving the Islamic faith is a big deal en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apostasy_in_Islam if you choose to downplay this thats your choice but I don't know if you knew. Magic and miracles are "common" in the sense that most people know it exist and believe that there are real dragons in the dark woods. It felt a bit downplayed but that might have been a misunderstanding by me. People was short and doorframes where low to keep heat in so even a shorter person would have had to duck when going inside a non luxury home. People did get old, as long as you survived your first 20 years. Those who lived past 20 often had close to our modern lifespan. blogs.plos.org/everyone/2014/05/16/statistics-predicted-healthier-medieval-london-following-black-death/A thought about the orcish language, if orcs have a limited vocabulary maby they do like Swedish and German and make composite Words: Skadeglädje/Schadenfreude or Hurt-Amusement in english. That's all. I love the AP and setting so don't worry about my critique, it's just to inform you if you don't already have this information. Ps. If all listeners would buy drinks from you at the same time, you would be in a lot of trouble :-)
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